All Comments on 'The Observatory'

I accidentally touched the space to vote 2 stars and now it won't let me change it! I liked it much more than that though, 4-5 stars :)

Great story. Five stars. A sequel would be very much appreciated.

This writer continues to produce well-written, creative stories! This story is very intriguing and provocative. I certainly hope there are more stories like this to come.

Clearly an outstanding piece of work...well written, well paced, and deliciously erotic.

More please. Excellent writing. Sounds like something that could actually happen.

Great work. Laura and Kevin are quite a pair!

This may be the best story I've ever read on the site. Laura and Kevin are the perfect erotic couple. I love the writing, I love the story line, and I love the sex scenes. The other two Laura and Kevin stories are great but this one is the best of all.

This tops them all. Wonderful story.

Two voyeurs's ideal setting, with a willing mate as accomplice.

You should be making your living writing. Nicely done. The characters you have created are human and believable. The sexual adventures you describe would be addictive. The aphrodisiac of new multiple sex partners along with the thrill of showing off in front of your mate would be incredible. I'll continue to read your stories, one by one, taking my time, enjoying them, along with the arousal they bring to me.

Well done.