All Comments on 'The Offering'

Please make a Chapter 2!

Loved it - very sensual and totally hot and erotic.

I enjoyed your story it was very erotic. You have a great imagination. Your next story you might want to proof read a little there were a few mistakes but nothing bad. I like using a text to speech reader you can find some free ones on the internet, or try using one of the editors from Literotica.

I loved the details and the statue coming to life.

Great imagery!