All Comments on 'The Orders'

Love it! Has me squirming for more!!

Not a bad first submission.

Keep it up.

This story was not bad for a first but maybe next time be a little more descriptive. Let the anticipation build up for the reader. It was like a quickie instead of a slow fuck. well maybe thats what you meant it to be. keep up the good work

Nice but it needs more detail try to have more description in the next one.

Good but it went by too fast. I would reccomend putting some more suspense into the story. I liked it though.

This was pretty good, I liked it and I didn't mind the lack of detail.