by Hubee
nice twist at the end, I didn't expect that. lol you might want to shorten the paragraphs next time, they're a bit lengthy and hard to read. keep writing!
This ending is priceless!! Didn't see it coming. Great, just great!
It was good reading; definitely a feel-good story. Right up until the Postscript. Unique and inspired, I'll give you that. But that ending removes all the magic of the story.
-- KK in Texas
Until the postscript it was going on My Favorites list. Now ... no. It was really great until then. Then you ruined it. It went from a 5 star to a 3 star.
what a twist! i'm not gonna skim my vote because of the ending like some people. i like something new and you gave it to me!
ahhh the good old, bad old days...ever my knight across the misty voids...angel:)
You, Sir, surely are a Paladin of the highest rank!