All Comments on 'The Outlander'

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 16 years ago
wow

nice twist at the end, I didn't expect that. lol you might want to shorten the paragraphs next time, they're a bit lengthy and hard to read. keep writing!

sacrificedangelsacrificedangelalmost 16 years ago
Still...

...Love it Hubee!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 16 years ago
Ha Ha

This ending is priceless!! Didn't see it coming. Great, just great!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 16 years ago
It was good, until....

It was good reading; definitely a feel-good story. Right up until the Postscript. Unique and inspired, I'll give you that. But that ending removes all the magic of the story.

-- KK in Texas

LilacQueenLilacQueenalmost 16 years ago
Like it or Love it?

Until the postscript it was going on My Favorites list. Now ... no. It was really great until then. Then you ruined it. It went from a 5 star to a 3 star.

cinnamon_kisses12cinnamon_kisses12almost 16 years ago
HEHE

what a twist! i'm not gonna skim my vote because of the ending like some people. i like something new and you gave it to me!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 15 years ago
taking a step back...

ahhh the good old, bad old days...ever my knight across the misty voids...angel:)

emeraldangelemeraldangelabout 8 years ago
A big fan of The Quest...

You, Sir, surely are a Paladin of the highest rank!

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