by Hubee
You, Sir, surely are a Paladin of the highest rank!
ahhh the good old, bad old days...ever my knight across the misty voids...angel:)
what a twist! i'm not gonna skim my vote because of the ending like some people. i like something new and you gave it to me!
Until the postscript it was going on My Favorites list. Now ... no. It was really great until then. Then you ruined it. It went from a 5 star to a 3 star.
It was good reading; definitely a feel-good story. Right up until the Postscript. Unique and inspired, I'll give you that. But that ending removes all the magic of the story.
-- KK in Texas
This ending is priceless!! Didn't see it coming. Great, just great!
nice twist at the end, I didn't expect that. lol you might want to shorten the paragraphs next time, they're a bit lengthy and hard to read. keep writing!