All Comments on 'The Package Ch. 06'

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MichelleWhoIsMichelleWhoIsover 12 years ago
Great Story!

I loved how you brought out the raw feelings and emotion of all your characters. Your choice of words was perfect. I have to admit that reading the final part of this chapter made me tear up with happiness that they found themselves the happiness that they all sought out of life.

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