All Comments on 'The Pact Ch. 01'

The lack of a trigger alert before you began your tale earns you a one rating from me. Your story tags are not listed until the end of the story has been reached, so if you're going to include controversial behavior such as 'golden showers' then it would behoove you to open with a trigger warning so that people not interested in such filthy disgusting perversion can immediately walk away.