All Comments on 'The Pains Of Loving Jenny'

You got the story off to a great start.

You built up the characters, their relationship, then BOOM! it stopped.

I'd love to see this one continue. You've started an itch that needs to be scratched. Beginning, middle and closure. I think this one is the beginning.

I'd love to find out why she ran. What happens between them in the future?

Again, great start. Good job! ;-)

that was good...keep it up!

I totally agree, a very good start, the story is very well build and the ending leaves the reader frustrated and wanting more....just about perfect. Hope to see the next chapter soon!

This is very well written. I can't wait to read more! Please continue this saga!

Cheers,

Lalenya :^)

Why did she run? When will we find out? Hmmmm?

You have an enjoyable, relaxed writing style that is a pleasure to read! And to find a story with real depth to the characters and the plot - wow! Keep it up, I can't wait to read the next chapter.

I liked it, a great start. Let's see where you take them.

Cookie