All Comments on 'The Party'

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 12 years ago
Fun read made me smile

A fun read! Light hearted and sexy without being overburdened with gory details (not that details are bad just too much sometimes) just as the little black dress entices yet leaves something to the imagination. Made me smile at the sense of enjoyment of the relationship. Refreshing

AnonymousAnonymousabout 11 years ago
JAIL

That's where he sent her right? For sexual assault. What a witch. Hope she enjoyed her time in prison.

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
My congretulations

Hallo,

first please excuse my poor English. Second let me tell you please what I really appreciate about your story - apart of the fact, that it´s well written and the dialogues are very good.

I like very much that you mention what we call in Germany a "double morality" - the girl is completely avoided/abandoned during the party, but afterwards people call her to make arrangements.

Furthermore you don´t describe directly the "spanking" - very rare in these kind of storys! - you only speak about it indirectly.

With other words: I did like your story very much - my congretulations!

Sincerely, Ludwig Miehe

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