All Comments on 'The Party'

There are a few whose soul purpose for visiting this site at all seems to be to drag down stories and rain on others' parades; thankfully, they are few in number and usually hide behind an 'Anonymous' parapet.

I enjoyed your story - it was a bit on the brief side, but still very good. Thank you for sharing what is an obvious talent with us and please keep writing - and always remember, YOU CANNOT PLEASE EVERYONE; trying to is a sure route to disappointment.

Five stars.

Thank you for your input. I welcome all who read this to email or comment on my stories. it just helps me get better. you cannot please everyone and I know I will get some negativity but I have only received positive comments and support. obviously those who leave bad comments don't know how hard it is to get a good story on paper. I don't pay any mind to anonymous comments because people use it as a way to hide behind who they are. if they want to comment, fine. just please leave a name. Mel, your comment is inspiring and hopefully i can dream up another story soon.

Your story ideas are good. I'm no expert but I think your writing is getting better all the time.

I enjoyed this even though it was a little short, the slave boy seemed have got off easy. But then again I think these stories could easily be seen as episodes in the life of the same domme.

Keep it going :)))

Shouldn't he be rewarded if he cleans properly? Kind of rude to find fault when he is trying his best and isn't slacking off, especially if he properly cleans. Bad behavior should be punished and good behavior should be rewarded .-.