All Comments on 'The Party'

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 16 years ago
very erotic

Well paced, hot and sexy. One suggestion - please run a spell/grammar check in your word processor. The typos are sometimes distracting.

Timeless13579Timeless13579almost 2 years ago

I loved the story! The narrator was so believable and so sensual, erotic with her description of the evening's events.

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I love to write and I love to please, what a way to combine the two. I'm new to this so please be gentle when you tell me what you think