by Thistlethorn
This is by far one of the best stories I've read on this site, and I've probably read at least 50 stories, series being counted as one, and I never read anything under four stars, so I am really very impressed, I sincerely enjoy the jokes that you put in, it adds a little bit of comedy that just brings it all together, truthfully I do believe that you could publish these into actual books and they would sell quite well, I don't speak for everyone(although they would be completely insane not to agree with me.) but I think that you should continue to write. Just don't change anything about your writing style. It's like a movie or television show, a lot of the time sequels aren't as good as the originals, it's because the people who made them changed the way they were done. I've seen to many a good writer lose their readers because of that. Please don't make that mistake.
Long ago I read a series of books about a Black Chinese Dragon who had become human. This is as wonderful as those books.
This is my first story involving a dragon. If you had told me I would be reading a story about dragons, I would've told you just how crazy you were. And I would be wrong. This is such a well written story. I'd say more, but I'm moving on to chapter 3 right now
this is really good, can't wait for more of this most excellent writing
There had better be more on the way, or else. Cause I know where you live. MWA-HA-HA!!
After the first installment, I admit I was a bit worried that you would have left an interesting short story to be just that; a short story. I'm glad to see that you've written and published another installment; in particular, I enjoy the way the plot is thickening, and the fact that you keep the characters (Dakota and Sebastian) feeling very real and organic just makes it all the better. I especially like how open-minded they both are, and how remorseful and genuinely kind Sebastian seems to be. Thank you for sharing this story with us, and I hope to see more from you in the future!
This an interesting story and I really like the use of chines mythology, a very good touch. thank you for sharing. Mechmanas