All Comments on 'The Peasant Captive Ch. 01'

can't wait to see where you take it from here.

Interesting start. However I would have love to see more of the mother part of the story. Keep on going.

start and so glad i found this story i bit late i love to read and hate to wait on a small chapter one by one however, i have a feeling this will well worth waiting for and look forward to reading on as well as long you continue to write. Excellent writing and intense to say the least. Thank you for allowing us to read you. respectfully fan in Texas naynay

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