by darkstone57
Why do fictional men have to call their fuck toys a bitch or a nasty whore to get off? Why is disrespect apparently so mandatory?
i would like to read more... maybe get them out of the bedroom and have a little tenderness?
So far this story is really hot. I think you should continue with it. It would be a shame to stop now
This is a wonderful beginning...please don't stop now! Harley is HOT!!!
I wanna read more about Harley & Keni, please continue!
i like to read your style of writing. good mix of dialogue and narrative. i think you can do a lot with these characters.
even better than the last posting! Well done I liked that Harley is emotionally involved rather than just sexually. Please make him DEAL with Waylon too!
please continue....i can see lots of adventures with these two (please not the brother!)
i really want to see more of a romantic side between these two, so please continue so we can see more of them, away from the bedroom maybe..
Hey, you don't have to like potato salad to like this story. I hate potato salad, but love this story.
this way or is it a put down?