All Comments on 'The Pet Wolf Ch. 04'

by Ironsilk

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ariesgirlariesgirlabout 10 years ago

I know its not funny but he put himself in this predicament. Since he blacked out I wonder if he will turn back into his human form. That would be so embarrassing for him. I can't imagine how he will explain himself.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 10 years ago
oooh

Poor baby. I'm kinda surprised he didn't wake when they got to her place. That guy's lucky "Fido" didn't eat him (our make him piss himself)

redlion75redlion75about 10 years ago

i think it was his imagination that saw them in bed.it also maybe that he smacked his head before she came home then will come around now that she is home.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 10 years ago
longer chapters please

Waited 4 months for one page.

dairetodairetoabout 10 years ago
Thanks for the chapter

Hope the next one is not far away

cantfightfatecantfightfateabout 10 years ago
A bit disjointed...

perhaps purposefully so if it's all a dream? The story still shows promise. Try to write longer chapters or post more frequently if you want the chapters to stay this length.

Looking forward to reading more of your work.

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