All Comments on 'The Photgrapher Ch. 01'

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 16 years ago
please continue

The possibilities are endless. Will she come pick up her pictures, who is the next client and of course slave for a day

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 16 years ago
Need More

Excellent start. Great Build-up. At least 1,if not two, additional chapters. The lady needs to be shown how to rekindle the fire in her husband and the photographer can surely show her.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 16 years ago
Encore!!

Lots of potential - keep this series goping!

antifuseantifuseover 15 years ago
Love it!

Please, don't leave us hanging!!!

cheerfulcharliecheerfulcharlieover 14 years ago
Don't stop now!

You must continue, and include Kate in the next session

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
Liked that story

I always enjoy any story of seduction by camera. As a keen am phtog i've used the camrea for a bit of seduction myseself, so i know it works.

It would be good to see the next chpetr of this story, i've been waiting for a long while.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 8 years ago
Missed name of Photographer in Title -- downhill from there

No one proof read this -- and it is obvious. Good idea poorly written.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 7 years ago
Not so bad...

Proofreading lack is obvious (but proofreading is ONE WORD) is not so obtrusive.

Story sets the stage for more hijinks, but there's no more story. I'd be happy to read other chapters.

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