by cuninglinguist61
Proofreading lack is obvious (but proofreading is ONE WORD) is not so obtrusive.
Story sets the stage for more hijinks, but there's no more story. I'd be happy to read other chapters.
No one proof read this -- and it is obvious. Good idea poorly written.
I always enjoy any story of seduction by camera. As a keen am phtog i've used the camrea for a bit of seduction myseself, so i know it works.
It would be good to see the next chpetr of this story, i've been waiting for a long while.
You must continue, and include Kate in the next session
Excellent start. Great Build-up. At least 1,if not two, additional chapters. The lady needs to be shown how to rekindle the fire in her husband and the photographer can surely show her.
The possibilities are endless. Will she come pick up her pictures, who is the next client and of course slave for a day