by belle_belle
One of the best, really enjoyed the pacing and the different women, nice use of build up. Write some more!
soft and sensitive, appealing and sensual, sexually exciting , add more playful tease , an outdoor scene ....waiting to read your second chapter ... soon
Being a photographer myself who specializes in boudoir/glamour photos, I can relate to this story wholeheartedly. I have had sex with several of my models throughout the past couple of years and each and every time it is a truly wonderful experience. The best time was when i was hired to document a bikini contest taking place in the Bahamas. I had sex with four of the contestants and eventually became lovers with one who has since moved in with me. She is the best assistant ever and she really knows how to make a new model feel at ease.......
First rate - no need for a re-take. Good development and a lesson to be learned for those trusting their your ladies to seductive photographers...... a sting was used in my home town and the local photo guy was sent away for nearly 20 years - for doing this, but with those a little younger....
I absolutely loved the story! All the right ingredients, gorky guy, interesting women and a real sex! hope you write plenty more...I'm off to boink the wife and dust off my camera!
I loved the gradual build up of the story, the flaws in the characters, the way they acted like real people and the way the relationship developed between them. Thanks!
Beautifully written, believable characters, hope there's a continuation to the story.
Like you belle_belle I have written as the other gender BUT you have done it far more skilfully than I could even have dreamed of.
Congratulations!
FANTASTIC, so horny from this story I had to put the dildo on myself.
Your writing is wonderful, the pace was great, and the eroticism very hot indeed. Thanks for an exciting story!
This one of the hotes stories I've read in a while, maybe because I'm a photographer, but very hot I hope to read more from you.
Fantastic story. Very hot. Definitely in need of being turned into a series!
You had a good flair for writing and combing a story with the sex. Would have like to see this become a series, but it looks like you stopped a long time ago. Oh well. If you are writing somewhere else please let me know.
I think being an amateur photographer allowed me to get into this story. But I was excited throughout. The scenario and characters had me hard for the entire tale. I'd love to see more.
Photo shoot seduction is a real turn on for me. I’ve done a little amateur photography but never been fortunate enough to live out my fantasy for real.