All Comments on 'The Pie'

Totally erotic and a complete turn on! I just wish there were more great stories like this one!

I'd love to be the guy in this story and yes I think you should continue it alot further.

So fucking hot, please write more about this..it felt so good.

Loved it, I'm a lover of cream pies....love warmth, the taste, the natural smell of the woman

I love creampie stories where the woman is the one who really wants/needs to be licked! Write some more?

now take the next step, get someone to cum in you while you swallow your husbands cum. then sleep all night, let that cum bubble and warm and ferment in your cunt. climb of him and pour the mess into his mouth for breakfast. disgusting...perverted...revolting...absolutely delicious. best when aged to perfection.

The concept of the creampie is erotically exquisite. To risk the relationship for such a sweetmeat is so reckless. To permit such licence for one's partner is so liberal, but such a gamble. To hazard not only her future fidelity, her reason for valuing the relationship, but also her potential fertility,,,

To then test all this by drinking down the sexual stigmata of her corruption by lapping deep between her thighs and feasting on the fluid proof she and her partners have summoned from their depths in the heat of their labours...

Exquisite.

As always Jen, I loved this story of yours. You write so well about the perspective of a couple...intimate...but very sexy. Not disgusting... but very erotic. This topic is one of my favorites... I would love to read more lik it.

mmmmmm

Great story

Second hardon I've gotten at work today. Well done!