All Comments on 'The Pissboy Mansion Ch. 03'

I found this story disappointing. It needs more build up and "piss-zazz" to be a good story. There is some grammar mishaps and the writer did not do very well describing the character backgrounds nor did they do a decent description of the task at hand. I did give leaky_one credit for posting and allowing for public comments. P.S. 'Morning' piss is never clear.

Fantastic peeing session, loved the series. More please.