All Comments on 'The Plantation Changes Hands'

switching from first person to third person makes it hard to follow the story context. somewhat far-fetched plot, but, i guess that's why it is caled fantasy fiction...

You had a 4 or 5 going until the ending.

The first person/third person changes were distracting, but worst of all, NEEDS a G O O D EDITOR to catch all the misspellings and wrong choice of tenses.

I love the story and plot. You need to make another like this. Please do and fast. This is great, if it weren't for the spelling mistakes here and there, this could be gold my friend.