All Comments on 'The Pleasure of Giving'

While I agree sharing is one of the greatest pleasures I don't agree with the narators opening statements. Other than that This is a very good story, well written and a terriffic first time story of anal.

I liked the way you described the loving action between Steve and Jacqui. For the first half of the story I thought that she was going to pull out a strap-on and take his virgin ass.

The most well written story I've read in a while. Very good. Write some more. I give it a rare 5.