All Comments on 'The Pledge'

by CityWolf

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AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Love your stories

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

This is the worst story I have ever seen. You made my “never read” list of authors! BTW, you are the only one on it!

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Great story!

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

It started good but after you filled the bus and everything after that was pure garbage. I am going to rate this a one star in hopes no one else waste their time reading this crap!

Pappasleaze!

ShmiShmiover 1 year ago

More Lisa The Risk Junkie!

holeinjolaholeinjolaover 1 year ago

Excellent story. 5 stars.

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Awe this was a sad story 😔

parenthesisparenthesisover 1 year ago

I guess some people get off on the whole humiliation thing?

Personally I think this was a load crap.

Crawl123Crawl123over 1 year ago

Pity she didn’t offer her ass to the cops to try to bribe them

ShmiShmiover 1 year ago

Well written, but not a fan of these kind of stories. Your Lisa The Risk Junkie are the best nude in public stories.

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Humiliation perfect. Scenario is ridiculous yet sexy. Don't let the negative comments get you down. It's a fictional story in the end, and the concept of just giving her clothes to sororities and somehow every powerful member is an alumni of that house should indicate the ludicrous nature of the story.

My only criticism is that Anne did not appear to get any sexual gratification in the story. What makes these stories fun is despite being humiliated in the worst way possible, the main character still get's some sexual pleasure because her body betrays her mind. Otherwise well written and look forward to seeing more

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

REALLY hot

mcenfmcenfover 1 year ago

I like this type of stories, congratulations, in fact I like all the stories you write, I look forward to a new story soon.

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

I always wanted a story where the girl was naked in the back of a bus, the more detail and the more things happen while being hidden, the better the story. I loved this one, I hope the other stories of her soon.

MichaelPvPMichaelPvPover 1 year ago

Can't even wait for the next one.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 year ago

Wolf, you haven't lost your touch at writing stories where women's exposure leads to their lives being completely destroyed. If I'm not mistaken, this is the first story where a woman got off on the degrading act they were forced to partake in.

AnonymousAnonymous5 months ago

what a load of sickos

AnonymousAnonymous4 months ago

A great story! Hope you do more like this one and "Steak Surprise", where everything is engineered by supposed friends. If you do write another like this, I hope it is longer too with more fleshed out consequences / fallout.

AnonymousAnonymous4 months ago

She had harmed no one, so while Sisters are meant to support each other it just shows how petty, vindictive Sorority Bitches can be.

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