All Comments on 'The Police Officer'

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 20 years ago
great story!

Can't wait for it to continue!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 19 years ago
I love it!

It's great again and again!

ChrysseChrysseabout 18 years ago
Purrr

I really like the way you write... perfect and hot!

redrose50redrose50over 12 years ago
Hot!

I really enjoyed this story. It was so STEAMY!

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
Good Start

I love what you have written here. Great combination of some maturity with the aggressiveness and some hints of gentleness to him. He seems like he has a lot of potential as a character, and I like how he manages to remain such an enigma.

Well written, very well written. The only thing is... with the way you ended this story, it comes off as unfinished, as if there is more to the story that somehow got forgotten when it was posted.

Great job with what's here. I would love to see another chapter here to finish telling the tale, or as a continuation of what feels like an unfinished story. Good work!

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
What happens next?

What happens next?? The policeman is super sexy.

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