by NorthwestRain
I love what you have written here. Great combination of some maturity with the aggressiveness and some hints of gentleness to him. He seems like he has a lot of potential as a character, and I like how he manages to remain such an enigma.
Well written, very well written. The only thing is... with the way you ended this story, it comes off as unfinished, as if there is more to the story that somehow got forgotten when it was posted.
Great job with what's here. I would love to see another chapter here to finish telling the tale, or as a continuation of what feels like an unfinished story. Good work!