All Comments on 'The Pool Ch. 01'

by CathyO1955

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AnonymousAnonymousover 18 years ago
Nice but too quick..

Nice story the sex was good, but too quick there should have been more build up, maybe some suntan lotion massaging or some more build-up. The seduction is better than the sex sometimes..

AnonymousAnonymousover 18 years ago
As the other commenter says the coupling was too..

..quick after which the sex details were too dragged out.

At least for me--

I'm sure that there are those who would skip the secuction entirely and like 3 pages of sex.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 7 years ago
Don

Such a sweet, delicious, seductive journey into your core....mmmm

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