All Comments on 'The Power Ch. 03'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
Please keep writing

This series is to good to end here

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
3 some.

Teams up with another guy with the power to fight the bad guy, but they both make a harem. Double penetration with 2 20 inch cocks? Thatd be crazy hot.

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
I love it

This guy's fantasies are my fantasies.

Awesome work, I hope you continue!

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
So good

Hey, I just got into your writing and it's really good!

I really hope you're continuing on with the series. I really want to know how this ends or where you're thinking of taking this thing.

It's unrealistic, but that's kinda what I'm here for.

The comment about the consistency does have a point, though. Edit before you submit.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 11 years ago
Please write more!

Woooo! That is soooo hot! Pls add more!

Smut_SupremeSmut_Supremeover 11 years agoAuthor
@ Basic Biology

Please read the previous chapters and the reason that he doesn't end up with acid burns is explained. This is meant to be an outrageous fantasy piece, and grounding it in reality is not the goal.

However, I'm still embarrassed about the Maria-Carla bit. My apologies to all of you.

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
Basic biology.

Basketball sized tits and a 20" dick? What happens when the head of the dick is immersed in the acid in the stomach?

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago

You changed Maria to Carla? Consistency please.

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