All Comments on 'The Preacher Ch. 02'

finally a story with content.you did a wonderfull job.write more, please?

but a good story - reminds me of a film with Clint Eastwood being a preacher.

I thought it was a great story. I gave you four stars instead of five because I had to take one away for poor spelling and inadequate proof reading. Actually, I should have taken two. There's no excuse for someone who can come up with a story as good as this one is to be so illiterate. You've cheated yourself of many readers who probably didn't even finish reading it.

Something to remember:

When you post a story, it's on here forever and will always be a reflection of your craftsmanship.... or lack thereof. That's why it's important to put in that extra effort to make it right. Where I come from, it's called having PRIDE.

even better when he used the shredder.....a favorite way of getting rid of someone used by the family.....good for feeding fish .......just like chum used to attract big fish....nice one......so glad he saved Donna and got to marry his girl....a good story