All Comments on 'The President's Gay Wife Pt. 04'

Did you write obituaries before trying to write stories?

The rambling story line, such as it is, wanders around like a drunken sailor and this writer never uses one word where there’s an opportunity to use ten. I've never read a story that is as flat as this one is. There are no high moments. There are no lows. In short, don't bother reading this unless you're suffering from terminal insomnia.