All Comments on 'The Proposition Ch. 02'

They had a pretty interesting day at work.

Wait, what? This can't be it! Where's the next chapter??

And......and? Come on! Im waiting!

This can be an amazing series, please continue!

You didn't actually say the story would be continued but I assume you realize there are many more chapters and adventures to explore. I eagerly look forward to reading them.

I enjoyed it as well, but found the transition between perspectives a bit disruptive. Some method of formatting could help, as long as it doesn't happen more than once a screen, say 4-6 paragraphs.

I admit I'm not really familiar with the options available, or how best to use them. I'm not much of a writer, more of a reader.

and the series is promising. I hope you will write more. Ty