All Comments on 'The Protégé'

you have succeeded in writing a story that brought my imagination some vivid images

thank you for writing this story. i once had a friend who i liked very much when i moved away i missed him so but this was back in the early to mid 70's

thanks again

4banger

Lovely story... Its simple and sweet. Great choice of words! Thumbs up!

I think that the story works okay. The story needs more explanation as to why the sexual roles changed...not too much more, but a few sentences might help. Other than that, it was okay.

True love at it best; lost now found. I am a woman but love gay stories.