by julius_smutwriter
You are a lucky man to be able to service women. There is nothing sweeter than making a woman happy by eating her pussy.
This just became my new favorite of favorites. You describe the action in very human terms without getting tedious about it. You don't compare his cock to a young oak tree or her vagina to a gushing waterfall, or any of that nonsense. The gimmick of having them act out the chapter of his story is clever, and it carries the action along. The couple don't get all analytical about their feelings; they're just horny and they haven't been satisfied lately. A wonderful light touch with all that, saying what's necessary and leaving the rest to the reader to figure out. As for apt description, I especially liked your comparing her breasts to warm silk.
All in all, a great piece of writing. Thank you.