All Comments on 'The Real Buffy Ch. 02'

Clearly you're a talented writer. I read your story in LW today and wondered how badly you'd get creamed. I gave you a five there, I hope it helps. I also hope this will help you get a 4.5 and an H. It seemes a shame tht only two of your stories don't have them and they're so close.

I especially liked the first part which didn't feel like a celebrity story at all. It was simply outrageous and funny. This second part, while still quite funny and all, goes overboard on the dumb sex obsessed scooby gang in my opinion. I do get a real kick out of the ending though, who have thunk it, a vampire master defending a slayer against his own son his gang.

Another fiver, I didn't even know of the scoobies, but I'm sure this version is the best without even seeing, hesring or otherwise groking the others.