All Comments on 'The Real Truth'

The author is a sick motherfucker.

Although the story didn't appeal to me very much, it's quite well written.

This is a site for sexual fantasies. Not all fantasies are comfortable jerk-off dreams. But everyone is entitled to their own fantasies and to express them as well as s/he can.

The previous commenter should remember where he is and not be so judgmental. Each of us, in our own way, is a sick fuck. If he doesn't want to be exposed to such writing he should go elsewhere. If he doesn't like the story he can just say so and go to another one, without resorting to name calling

that explores the dark side of human nature. This is the second story I have read by this author and the male character is a real bastard in both. It shows life from a different perspective. We have enough "cookie cutter" stories on this site. Thanks for something unique.

The iron and clay of your creation leaves a mix that is worthless. The pathetic weakness of yourself in the story makes the ending as unbelievable as an abused wife ever wanting your touch. In reality, you are the bore without a life to speak of in the unyeilding mix of iron bullying in the weak and clay feet when meeting strength.

Well, I'm glad you got that out of your rear. A bit pathetic for you compared to prior work. Calous, pompous, mean spirited not entertaining. Curious as to what prompted it. Feel better? Hope this is not a trend - or that a personal tragedy caused the painful outburst?

Peculiar is ok but this was unfavorably so far beyond that.

Revert please

Rude and vulgar story,not worth much comment.

would think this would be more appropriate in the nonconsenual category,sure doesn't belong in loving wives in any manner.makes me wonder what went wrong in the authors life to feel compelled to write this.

to the correspondent who thinks this his realm to judge other peoples comments...this is my opinion and i'm sticking to it.

as for being unique, well axe murderers are unique but i don't like them either.

don't recall ever giving a zero rating before but this story certainly is worthy.

Well written story but the subject matter was alittle lacking. Not to many will like this one

And I didn't read all of it.

Well written and very unique. I didn't find it enjoyable but I am confident that I will rememger it.

You have catpured the very essence of a true hipocrit. He is making judgments about Charlie and calls him empty, however he is a sadistic no count mutherfucker. He has no compassion for the wife...he just fucks her and leaves her to her husband. All marked up from his encounter with her. The best part would be if she went to the police and showed them the marks that he inflicted. He would be in prison getting butt fucked by blubba in no time.

Just wanted to dump on a character I have met many times in life. The last one I left half dead and crippled for life. I love the way you write and capture women.

2 words.<>P

Talent wasted - exploring the fews scummy rankness degrades the talent used.<P>

I wonder why the bitterness towards women? - and self?

What the fuck?

i'm stunned.

ptstewart, you are a sick puppy!

keep up he good work.

nasty nuff said

As stated in my title,but wife's character gets 5*.

he is a bully, a coward, and a fucking jerk. TK U MLJ LV NV

Your narrator is a sick piece of shit. True story?

Outstanding writing. 5 stars and added to my favourites.

Very good descriptive and alliterative writing, but not a whole, complete story. too much left for the reader to ponder....