All Comments on 'The Receipt'

It is a fine morning when I encounter either a Winterfrog or a Papatoad original first thing in the morning! The protagonist said all we had to know when he said that he would not confront Lisa about the receipt because she would lie. If he knew that when he married he has no grounds for divorce! OK he knew she was a liar but did not imagine that she was an adulterer!

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Fun story, thanks Winterfrog.

Bruce22

Thanks for a good read. Even though the cast was large you handled it very well. Looking forward to your next story.

A reasonable man taking reasonable actions.<P>

I always wonder why one partner in a marriage decides it's okay to unilaterally change the rules without informing his/her spouse. Despite the protestations of still loving the spouse how can you still respect someone that you do that to?<P>

Thanks for sharing.

EXCELLENT!WINTERFROG gives an excellent insight into womens' view of infidelity.To understand what WINTERFROG is observing one must leave the old preconceptions regarding marriage in the dust bin of history.As so accurately chronicled in the wonderful

dialogue between Anne and Lisa, the decision to break their wedding vows is a mute point.An oath to God regarding fidelity, has little or no meaning to these women.Their affairs are long term,planned operations that follow tight schedules that account for all variables in the cuckhold's mode of operation.Most wives are well aware of the strengths and weaknesses in their husbands position and are careful to attack him hardest where he is weak.Lisa knows her husband's working hours and confines her activity to times when he is busy.She foregoes the usual meeting places such as motels and concentrates on safe locations such as Helene's apartment.In case of trouble, Lisa has multiple layers of plausible alibis and friends that would vouch for her innocense.Overall, this is a welll thought out military type operation designed for maximum slealth.Having said this you have to ask why is it noteworthy?Men who frequent bars cheat with similar frequency.Why is one case different than the other?The answer goes back to the meticulous planning so typical of Lisa and Anne.It is true that men in bars guzzle liquor and chase skirts.However,it is ,rarely, planned!Most sober men do not chase women because they can not afford to do so.Most of their money goes into mortgages,household expenses,chilren's education,and new clothes for the wife.They do not keep mistresses because they can not afford to do so.They can not let their families down.Most good husbands must put their homes as their top life priority.This is not the case with most wives.Hubby provides the essentials so she is enabled to indulge her lust for strange cock and kinky sex.RITTERBURG #55

As always its refreshing to read your stories. Keep them coming.

Just a terrific story of a man who finds out how his mate really feels about him and he acts. She had no respect for her husband or anyone else. She just wanted what she felt made her happy. She more then likely will always be a selfish person who only gives to get what she wants. <P>

I love the way you write with your vernacular and straightforward style. <P>PT

Damm - this author is consistently entertaining and we appreciate his efforts.

This is the first of your stories I have read - it won't be the last. I loved everything about it, the characters, the storyline and the way it was paced. Keep on writing, it's a pity some of the other writers on this site do not read this story to find out how to write.

This story is a really good story that kept my attention to the very end. It was also a really fun read. Winterfrog - as in American baseball, you hit a home run with your story. Incidentally, are there any frogs that do not hibernate in the wintertime in Norway? I would be most surprised if there were. RAG

are cool-headed? why all the swearing all the time? Winterfrog, you need to tweak with your main characters now and then, because they sound so alike, swearing the same phrases and words. Stop using less "Oh, my God!" on your women characters. <p>

There is no point, reason, or rational for a wife whose husband's just found out about her affairs and told her about them ,,,, to want to go over to her best friend Anne's place to comfort her, because the latter's husband, Robin, had already kicked her ass out a few hours before. <p.

Such dialogues just don't make the story and the characters believable. Yes, it is a typical lighthearted Winterfrog story, with lighthearted Scandinavians who hardly squeeze each other's testitcles; but, geee, you gotta come up with fresher material. Phrases and words like:...... <p>

"Oh, my God, I am so stupid; when did you find out? Can we work this out?" and "Your damn ---" and "Your damn Pussy hound lover ---"...... should be used less.... <p>

But I like the friendly talks at the end, where the kids could visit either parents freely,,,, with both parents being so nice towards each other, though,,, of course, after the wife's silly and perfunctory plea: "Honey, I love you so much. Can we talk about this?" and after he gently reminds her again, "You pussy hound lovers have made it impossible for me to look at you the same way again, even though I love you very much..."

So different from most cheating wife stories. In Winterfrogs stories the evil cheater normally gets caught and normally gets punished. But not so badly that they can never recover. Please continue writing.

Author please disregard the milk-toast wimp who accused you of being upset with a cheating wife and using foul language - or was that fowl.<P>

Your expressive mindset was nothing compared real life so I can't understand is when addressing a cheating ho in any language - course or worse.<P>

Keep up the good work - you are looked forward 2.

With High Regard

I love your stories as they are clear and to the point. I look for your stories and thank you for this one, and hopefully more will be coming soon.

It is a pleasure to read a straight forward story where the consequences of cheating are so clear. The use of language is enough different from the way people think and speak where I live that it added to the flavor of the story. Thank you.

Only PapaToad writes unrepentant women better than Winterfrog. Good story: concise and well paced. Nice for our non-wimpy man to live happily ever after. Thank you Winterfrog for another good story!

I liked the story, why is winterfrog always writing such stories and never so far wanted to find out why they done it? I think you can say it is there fault because they have cheated but... and there is the question why? you always can blame one side rather easy and I really don't like it also when someone gets behind my back. But I always insisted to know why and then why they never talked to me about what ever problem it was. and thats what I miss in his stories. he just gets on, like a little baby that falls down cries, gets up and laughs and has allready forgotten the pain seconds before

The old homily says, "<I>You play, you pay.</I>" but with respect to infidelity, it should say, "<I>You play, everybody pays.</I>" Good cheating wife story by Winterfrog.

It really is hard following your stories. You have some of the best plots, but, the hardest to follow because of the poorest command of the english language I have ever seen.Either learn the language or get somebody to help you!!!...............Again, I love your plots.............Please get some help

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Author please disregard the milk-toast wimp who accused you of being upset with a cheating wife and using foul language - or was that fowl. <p>

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I made no accusation, you retard. <p>

I simply observed that swearing terms, and other cliches, needed to be use sparingly for EFFECT, not that he the creator or his wronged characters [be they husband or wife] should not use them. <p>

Stick to the fuckin' story --- praise it or critique, but let go of others so they may enjoy the same rights. And, please, don't send people email challenge them to meet here or there, if they are so tough, etc. ad nauseam. We are here to read and critique erotic stories. <p>

I don't need to email people with pseudo threats to feel manly; if I need to feel manly, they will, out of the blue have their balls smashed, fingers cut, head bashed, etc. Out of the blue, not silly email threats, etc. Those are 3rd grade tactics. So, again, stick to story critiquing and don't send private emails to people who make critical remarks of stories in these venues.... strange people who may or may not, deep down, be tough than you are... you never know what kind of life they may have led, etc. <p>

A nice, civil reminder...to all readers. If the writers feel they have been personally insult, they delete appropriate posts, that's the way to go....

Still another excellent tale by Winterfrog! Please keep up the great work in the 'Loving Wife' arena. Thanks for sharing your ideas with us.

Your English is improving but I suspect you have an editor helping you. Everything else you write is plagiarized so why not have someone else clean them up too. I cannot understand why Literotica publishes this tripe!

I usually like some of the comments as well as I like the story. I especially liked Rittersburg#55's comment. It is very true that housewives have the better opportunity and means to cheat. Most husbands do not have the money to waste chasing women as they devote their pay to their families. It is a truism that most younger women do not need to spend money getting laid, as the players go all out to get them. I have observed too that Scandanavian women do not respect the vows they make as being all that serious. I do not make any particular judgements on that and assume that is a Northern European way of thinking. I fully realize that as a general rule, Americans have a very religeous mindset when it comes to marriage vows. I understand that Europeans consider us as being childish in our thinking concerning sexuality and sex. I think that they are right...

Thanks for you stories. They are often very true to life.

What was the point of this story? That unfaithfulness is bad? Yes, we can all agree on that. Or most of us, anyway.

But seeing as this is a forum for erotic or pornograhic texts, why was this posted? There was little-to-none sex in it, just a protagonist who outsmarted everyone else. If you'd spiced in a little sex - I don't care with whom - the story would at least have fulfilled a purpose...

The only reason I kept reading this was that I wanted to see how you were gonna finished it but that was fairly predictable as well.

Only a single star from me, I'm afraid.

if you are a damn pussy hound be sure to guard your acorns because Winterfrog will surely kick them or cut them off, he is a beast!

I like how you write,is very plasant to know there are men wrtting and not only cuckolds.

No English speaker would say this. They would instead use:

"You're crazy!" Sane and insane are used almost in a clinical sense. It' definitely not the word you would use in an argument with your husband.

The level of Lisa's infidelity doomed the marriage. However, I don't care for stories of marital breakdowns involving children. The children could have been omitted from this story without materially affecting the storyline.

I actually disagree with the commenters who do not think Winterfrog's stories belong on this site. The Cheating wive's stories are what a lot of us choose to read. I personally am not looking for a "Stroke" story and prefer the non-erotic. I haven't looked at the requirements for a Loving wife story, but generally find both erotic and non-erotic, as well as some pretty sick ones. I accept either and just skip the erotic scenes when they are too long. I have tried to just find the non-erotic stories only, but have found there are not that many. So I just type in Cheating Wives and find 100s of them. Face it, the interracial, fetish, and others just don't appeal to a lot of us. Again, I love these cute little macho stories! The women are stubborn, appear to be dumb and get thrown out on their ass when they get caught. They are not realistic but fun reading! You kick Em to the Kurb types should love them. I am not neccessarily one of you, but the way this Authors describes his wives justifies it. He even finished this story with the info that she had done a 3 some once, and thus was a serial cheater. So without some additonal background other than wanting some strange- she screwed up. Wintergreen don't take that shit!

One of the worst.

second time was the charm for someone or two, TK U MLJ LV NV

It's grammatically correct, but it's not something a native English speaker would say in this kind of situation. Sane is almost a clinical term. What you would say is, "You're crazy."

One of your comments decides to give winterfrog a lesson in English. I would like to ask him how many languages he speaks and how many stories he has written in each language. If you want to give winterfrog some constructive criticism suggest how the storyline could be improved or the characters better defined. Well done Winterfrog your tale amused me and your female characters were a real hoot.

An author who born and raised in a foreign country does not use English quite good enough for some of the picky shits on this site. It is quite obvious that the ex wife at the end of the story is found out to be true lying, cheating, wanton slut and had a number of sexual partners while she was married.

A commons theme in this forum but ti seems to ring true all to often in life that people fail to use their heads - the one on their shoulders -

Enjoyable read.

Great story, wife believing husband was stupid and would never find out. Lied to his face, what did she expect.. oh.. told her self she was a devoted and honest wife to him... well, curtain sure fell on her. Great story

English is not this authors first language. This detracts so much from the story to me, comes across like its written by a 12 year old.

This is a free site. You get what you pay for. Second if you want to complain about grammar, become a English teacher and you complain à much you want.

Your protagonists are always sane men that do what has to be done! There is no whining or indecision, there is thought, resolve and action. Much healthier than the crybabies who drag it out or worse take the loser back. By the way, it has restored some of my faith in the Scandinavian culture which otherwise looks like a permissive socialist mess.

Really all i wanted was a epilog. What happened maybe two to five years later. I wanted her depressed and still alone & seeing what she lost. Him married with a new child, better life in everyway from her.

even in ongoing Trysts. TK U MLJ LV NV

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Married female college instructor in Helena Montana lost that job because info on profile was given to associate dean of academic affairs. At least one of her lovers was a student of hers.

She also admitted having conversation about her thong panties with another male student.

Trickle down slowly, good plot. One of your better stories.

Understand another country but cheaters caught and more than once so severe pain

A giant soap opera. I will say this for Winterfrog's male characters. They trip over the slightest cheating and never give any quarter. It's always right to a divorce. It must be the long night's up there in Sweden that makes the men so cranky and the women so horny and loose.

I love the image of a cheater being pelted with raw eggs at her work place. Thanks for that.

It would have been even funnier if they had been rotten eggs

I like the Frog's stories, but I wish he was a little rougher on the cheaters.

Great plot with cat and mouse game, typical of Winterfrog in his better stories.

I have to say that his description of Scandinavian women (Swedish in his case) is right on money. Many of them can love a guy and go for a random fuck with somebody else without thinking twice.

I would know, this is info for Americans that are so enamored with "Swedish blondes". Although US has even higher divorce rates than Scandinavian countries. Your best bet for fidelity are Arab women, there you have the lowest divorce rates in the world.

I like WF's MCs; no crying, no puking, just direct, definitive action. 5 stars!

I'd have preferred more damage and revenge to cheating skanks but this was good enough for 5 stars.

But what really annoyed me was douchebag's wife who ONLY decided to divorce NOT because of him cheating with multiple women but because he broke big screen TVs. Typical female.

Why is it in this author's stories,the cheated upon husband always has two young children?