All Comments on 'The Reluctant Heterosexual'

I'm looking for feedback on this story more than any I've written. Constructive criticism is more than welcome. THX.

I liked the story, him taking it in the ass so soon was probably not realistic but you never know.

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A good story, but more believable if they'd used condoms for the anal sex. I liked the fact that he let go of his inhibitions and took the step from seeing Chris as a girl to the full gay experience.

You might have had better luck with this in Transexual/Crossdresser, but it works for GM too.

Thanks for the comments. Sorry DCarter I'm live a couple thousand miles away. As I mentioned I'm 100% hetero, but thanks for the offer.

I don't have Timothy's reservations about bareback sex. Very few erotic story are entirely believable to start with, so it's just a question of accepting the author's premises temporarily, for the sake of enjoying the story. When it comes to anal sex, in fact, I agree that the objective reality requires condoms, but in a stroke story, this only starts you thinking about why condoms are a good idea (nothing to do with STD!) which is just a basic turn-off. (It's the same thing with strraight sex: you don't mention smelly feet or beer belly or jiggly hips in an erotic story). So Ghosthunter, just continue to pretend that everybody has had an enema recently.

Hot. As a guy who secretly wears his wife's stuff occasionally, I loved the whole image. Mmmmm

Chris.

Really good story! I liked the progression. Didn't seem rushed like a lot of stories on here

This is one of the hottest stories I've read on this site (and I've read A LOT). So realistic and filled with real life desire and trepidation. Your fantasy is now my fantasy and I really enjoy it. Thank you so much for sharing. A story like this is a small treasure.