All Comments on 'The Reluctant Journey Ch. 03'

I really like the story and it has me very interested in what happens next. Plus I wanna know what happened to the generals brother.

You gotta start getting into this story and stop beating around the bush with these illusions and intimations. I like this story and like your writing. But... Too much teasing has me thinking "never mind."

Is what I thought upon seeing chapter 3. Enjoyed it, must wipe my chin as I am salivating wanting more. May I ask when we can expect the next?

Regards,

R

My schedule has recently been a little crazy hectic, so more??? I'm not exactly sure, but I'm flattered at your salivation :) . I know things are a little slow in the story now, but please bear with me.

Your story is nicely done so far. You took the time to develop a plot and characters; now please don't leave us hanging for too long!

Can't wait for the next installment!

I really need another chapter. There were too many cliff hangers. Please let us know if you are writing more or not? If not, I will be disappoibted, but better than keeping my hopes up. I really lije this story. What happens when thy find out she isn't Olivia?

As I reread my previous comment I realized that it could be construed that I did not know if I was going to be writing more or not. However that isn't the case, I intended to say that I didn't know when I would be writing more. My apologies. I submitted chapter 4 early Monday morning and it should become available shortly.

Your plot is all twisty. I like it.

She needs to look at the silver lining here. She's in a house full of hotties, it could be worse LOL :) But I see what she means, it's incongruous.

Tristan seems a little interesting, used to be more "uninhibited", they say..? Hmm? Does that mean "way too twisted and sadistic for anyone sane to even start to get a handle on"? I hope so, Malia could get into some really violent situations with him, be all broken and suicidal, and Cain to have to fly in to the rescue! Call me a romantic :).

Loving her feistiness, loving Cain's feistiness, loving the feistiness of the sex they will have. Can't wait!

Well written, but long and boring. I abandon, very rare for me!