All Comments on 'The Reluctant Lesbian Ch. 02'

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CeliaisAlienaCeliaisAlienaover 13 years ago
Very pleasing!

This series falls nicely in that space where it's very sexy and edgy, but also nice and tender too.

Having followed the 'babysitters' before, I know this *could* get more complicated for all concerned! But regardless, it's very interesting so far and promises to remain so, whether it keeps the fuzzy (step)sisterly vibe or not.

I do look forward to this saphic sexy makeover!! I'm sure it will be horizon-expanding! . . .

PoutineFanPoutineFanover 13 years ago
Nicely done :)

Like the previous reviewer said, this is striking a nice balance between edgy and tender. Very glad I stumbled across this one :)

Randee2058Randee2058over 7 years ago
Whooie

Man that's one crazy chapter!!!😜 Watchdwag you rock😘😝😁😎

5🌟's

MyAssIsDragoonMyAssIsDragoonalmost 3 years ago

VERY stimulating, as before!

LONG 1st person past-tense description of Meagan's seduction of Whitney. I might have broken that up into a conversation between Meagan and Cheryl that is more "symmetrical", or would at least put breaks between many long paragraphs of hearing through one woman's perspective, another woman's successful seduction of...yet a THIRD woman.

It reads pretty well, as it is, but I think it could be made easier for the reader, as I described above. It looks like you've written several chapters, for which I'm glad! I expect that my reading time will be well-spent on those, also.

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