by only_more_so
Another good selection. I do wish the women would get a little less coy. Are all of them knocked up?
Anyway, an excellent story. Bravo!
I sure hope you'll finish this tale, however long it becomes, without any lengthy delays between the remaining installments!
This was another good chapter, if a bit short. And your hinting about pregnancy(ies?) could be subtler.
please finish the whole story. (quite a few unexplained persons/side stories)
I started this story some time ago but quit in the middle of the first chapter because it was too simple. A psychic with a harem. This time I actually read it and am very favorably impressed. I luv your characters and your story development.
If you would like a copy editor to help you with any of your work give me a shout, I'm retired so I can get things back to you in a hurry.
love the story but think it's just so wrong that they are hiding that they are pregnant from him I think he's going to be really hurt they didn't tell him