All Comments on 'The Rent is Due'

Writing in second person is tough, but you made it work here. Kudos, on taking the road less traveled.

While I enjoyed the story and think it was written well, I found the use of numbers a bit jarring. Please spell out the numbers less than ten and any number at the beginning of a sentence.

please i have to know it was worth it ,please write the next chapter .

The story is hot and i can't wait to know if they get to have any more passionate encounters...

My Cock is Still Throbbing!

And as for your use of numbers being jarring to the delicate reader before me, she should go back to grading junior high writing assignments and leave erotica to the men folk.

god that story is good and sexy...hurry and give me more ...yes hurry as I want more of you...

so ready for chapter 2

I wish I could do this as bi guy I would love doing this I want to be fully with another man I have been with another guy and I fell in love with him and he fell in love with me I never thought this could happen to me but it did his kisses were so sweet and so tasty sadly we broke up the best love making I had ever experienced better than any woman I had been with

I was raped in college - I was so humiliated and embarrassed I didn't report it. For the next 8 or 9 years I was unable to perform sexually with a women. I was transferred by my company and one of the colleagues I was to shadow did his best to help me get oriented. He and his wife invited me over for dinners, introduced me to their circle of friends and even set up a couple of blind dates. One afternoon following a hard game of racquetball I saw my friend and benefactor in the showers. His long thick white cock reminded of the rape, and the guys making fun of my small penis. I turned red (as red as Koreans get), rinsed off and made for the locker room. He came in as I finished dressing, invited me out for a drink then came to stand near me and asked what was going on with me.

Well we finished the conversation at his house with me sharing everything. I was crying by the time I told him I'm unable to get an erection with women and that day, looking at his cock, had gotten my first erection since the rape. My confessions led to his, and before too long we were naked in his basement on a cot, and I experienced gay sex from a loving bisexual man. I was and am still 15 years later, his.

I want more. I hope he extorts many payments from this man. Hot!

Part two please!

it was worth it.

That was hot!

I waas in a similar position , same rhing happened after i started sucking his cock i couldn`t get enough of it ! a few years later i found out he had posted a video of me sucking his cock ,the women i was dating found it ended that relationship

Great glimpse into how you felt