All Comments on 'The Retreat'

Great writing.... cannot wait for the next part.

Haremgirl, fantastic to see your new posting! Great start...anxiously waiting for future chapters!!!

I will definitely be looking for your next update. :)

Great start! I can't wait to see what happens next.

Glad your back! I can already tell this will be another success. Hope you life and writing play nice, so you can finish:-)

So glad that you're back. i've always enjoyed your stories, and its great to finally be able to read another one from you. :P

Great start... already i'm hooked!

Perhaps now that I'm older and have been in the world I can better appreciate tenderness and foreplay. The contrasts between familiarity and the shock of the new in this story made for engrossing reading. I will be happy to follow subsequent installations.

Your stories have always reached me; heart, mind, groin. Thanks for another winner.

again rears its ugly head.

I'm beginning to see a pattern here. While I really enjoy your writing for the most part, I don't know that I'm prepared to go thru the excruciating stupidity of two more of your characters.

I may take a break, read some gratifyingly happy stories for a bit and come back to your emotionally challenged characters when I've had a chance to recharge.

This author did not finish this story, so read on at your own peril. If you like having things left unfinished....bleh.

Thanks to the previous commenter -whoever you are- for the warning. I'd still pass without your warning though, this is one of those wasted-years-without-going-all-the-way-because-of-a misunderstanding type of romance story. A definite no-go for me.