by haremgirl
Thanks to the previous commenter -whoever you are- for the warning. I'd still pass without your warning though, this is one of those wasted-years-without-going-all-the-way-because-of-a misunderstanding type of romance story. A definite no-go for me.
This author did not finish this story, so read on at your own peril. If you like having things left unfinished....bleh.
again rears its ugly head.
I'm beginning to see a pattern here. While I really enjoy your writing for the most part, I don't know that I'm prepared to go thru the excruciating stupidity of two more of your characters.
I may take a break, read some gratifyingly happy stories for a bit and come back to your emotionally challenged characters when I've had a chance to recharge.
Your stories have always reached me; heart, mind, groin. Thanks for another winner.
Perhaps now that I'm older and have been in the world I can better appreciate tenderness and foreplay. The contrasts between familiarity and the shock of the new in this story made for engrossing reading. I will be happy to follow subsequent installations.
So glad that you're back. i've always enjoyed your stories, and its great to finally be able to read another one from you. :P
Great start... already i'm hooked!
Glad your back! I can already tell this will be another success. Hope you life and writing play nice, so you can finish:-)
Haremgirl, fantastic to see your new posting! Great start...anxiously waiting for future chapters!!!
Great writing.... cannot wait for the next part.