All Comments on 'The Retreat Ch. 04'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 16 years ago
Love it!

Love it! Cant wait for more! This is a great love story! Cant wait for the next chapter! Thanks

AnonymousAnonymousover 16 years ago
EXCELLENT

This story is EXCELLENT! the love scenes are hot! I really like your style of writing and I absolutely love the characters and plot development. I can't wait for the next installment and look forward to them sharing how they feel to one another. I am so glad you updated. Thank you.

northbaybearnorthbaybearover 16 years ago
Loved it, as always!

You're stories are so hot, and true, and entralling. And, I'd love to see more of the relationship of Leslie and Cameron. The beginning of this story, with the heat and passion generated by the older folks was particularly a turn-on for this older fellow.

Thank you.

clive_iluvnycclive_iluvnycover 16 years ago
Thank you for your stories

Don't apologize for a minute. We are the lucky recipients of your generosity and are loving every minute -- even the cliffhanger. I was having difficulty believing Jess could let this happen like this at first, but the developing story has changed my mind. Thank you for this and all your stories. Great grammar and spelling.

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