All Comments on 'The Reunion'

not a bad beginning to a story, but not great either. the big weakness is: it is too short. people meet, reconnect, and .... nothing more.

feels empty, kinda.

I remember i had a crush in high school but nothing like that ever happened to me i hope there is a chapter 2 .

Pat Murray.

Atlanta,Ga.

Great work, Kain. I hope you're planning to continue.

Good start, please continue.

Will be mentioned in the New Stories Review Thread in the Author's Hangout.

I'm a big fan of leaving something to the imagination. Although I have to admit, I'd love to read what happens after the hotel room door closes. I'm glad I found your story, Kain.

I like the reconnection. You worked it up pretty well. Are we left with the same recipe of a romance novel (and with our imaginations) or will you fill us in with more?

What a wonderful beginning, you cant leave it hanging like that. Can you? ~smiles~

beautiful love... perfect, tender...

Are there going to be any more Adventures ? Would love to read what happens next and If he ever hears back again from the stars in the previous stories.