All Comments on 'The Reward of a Lifetime'

I read your second part (Chapter 1) before realizing you had a prologue. I like the idea of Emery being "average". He's easier to relate to than the various "12 pack / horse cocks" characters so often written about. A good start that gives me more info about Emery which helps me understand the second part better. I'll leave feedback on "Chapter 1" after I reread it, now that I've read this first part.