All Comments on 'The Ring'

by bamadude55

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 16 years ago
More please

I really like this story and hope to see more.

toddster119toddster119about 16 years ago
Unlimited Possibilites

This is one interesting story. I'm hoping to see what's next soon. The possibilities are endless. I'll be reading as long as you keep writing.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 16 years ago
A good Start

A Very cool start I just hope you follow up

AnonymousAnonymousabout 16 years ago
Be Descriptive

So far, Outstanding. Be descriptive of the muscled and hot bodies, and let us see where your sexual imagination goes. Go wild, and Bi!!!!!!

AnonymousAnonymousover 15 years ago
definitions

By no means is fiction necessarily "unbelievable". Perhaps that would better define "fantasy".

C_frommnC_frommnover 13 years ago
Nice!!

Like the way the Story Starts.

it would be awsome to stumble onto The Ring!

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
I wonder...

If this is what he did w/ the ring, I wonder what Bilbo Baggins did w/ it.

Lord_JohnnyLord_Johnnyover 7 years ago
Longer

I think the only thing I really have a problem with in this series is a desire for the chapter to be longer, and the fact that driving from Florida is New Orleans is about a 12 hr drive.

wastor64wastor64almost 5 years ago
Imaginative!

I like where this is going... lets see more... I'm hoping some of the adventures are more humorous, Hornica sounds quick puckish

cindyp1976cindyp1976almost 3 years ago

very cool story and can't wait to read more

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

Let me have a ring like that.

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