All Comments on 'The Ring'

Loved it. You're a good writer (thanks for paying attention to grammer and punctuation), and the story is hot. Don't make us wait long for Chapter 2.

Great start, looking forward to part2.

I'm trying to guess what this guy is, Vamp, Wolf, Wizard, really sexy magician? I hope you're not going vamp or wolf route, that's getting purty darn old anymore.

Is her ability to speak her thoughts affected by the ring? What about her facial expressions? Do they mirror the command or her thoughts and feelings? Hope you expand on this.

Anxiously waiting to be able to read more of this story...please post soon!

Though, these words lead this imagination to so many incredilbe wild possibilities...

the tease, of a continuation... without one, yet...

is... difficult... *smile*

Title of the comment says it all.... My wife even came to this story.... Need more!