All Comments on 'The Rings'

Very good buildup. Well written. I would have savored it a bit more if this had included some post discovery dialogue between husband and wife. I love that kind of emotional exploration. The story ended as abruptly as the marriage.

That is my only negative comment on the story -

The other issue I have questions about is the woman herself - a more drawn out ending might have answered those - the nympho line does not not cover it.

The realities of custody etc were just fine - BUT readers ought to remember - there is no reason to ASSume all stories are supposed to be completely true or believable by all of us - they are stories after all - entertainment!

I enjoyed this story until the nymphomania comment...this is merely a rationalization of her behavior & in no way any sort of mental condition. If she had undergone therapy to determine the circumstances that led her to cheat, that would have been a commendable attempt to move on.

to the point from the husband's side. wife is a slut. love the wives who say they used a rubber but admit to sucking cock and eating cum - you can get a disease that way too. will give you a 5.

The stupid cheating whore was only sorry that she got caught

Tx for all your tails keep them coming !

I agree on both commenters' points. Having bareback sex with a women you suspect of having trysts is awkward. However, using a condom with a wife who knows you're snipped is a GIANT red flag. Even the second time, when he is surer because of HER condoms, he cannot be positive she is diligent in using them or if they might have broken on previous trips (breaks actually happened in the tale)! Better to stick with upset tummy - barfing so she could hear it should have been EASY!

This is LitEROTICA! The tale is remarkably non-erotic ... even Hubby & Sweety's two sessions were, quite realistically, brief and 'married business-like'. Then we have a photo which suggests a 'strange' hand up her skirt. I think the most erotic part was the description of her LBD (no, this is NOT my fetish, it is a rating of 1.2 - using a 1 to 10 scale - on her cocktail dress)

closet cuck lock. damn cocksmoking ass bandits trying to pump each other in the cornhole with tiny flaccid weenies, better they squeak here where they won't get bitch slapped though.

... Wow .. you really know how to make her suffer????? KISS MY ASS YOU WEAK ASS PUSSY ( WHICH IS PROBABLY WHAT YOU ARE YOU STUPID WHORE OF A WRITER!!!! ) FUCK YOU AND YOUR P.O.S. STORY!!!

I don't want to be unfair to Agena so first of all let me begin by saying that I enjoyed the story. It was well written and entertaining, as are most of that author's stories.

That being said, the main reason I chose to comment on the story was the usual annoying and idiotic comment by our old friend Dwornock. I think I've come to reassess my position in regards to Dwornock. Oh I still consider Dwornock to be a complete ass, don't get me wrong. The thing that I'm reconsidering is the proper response to that individual's tiresome and idiotic comments. I've come to realize that those of us who respond to the idiot are probably playing right into the game. I suspect that Dwornock enjoys getting a reaction from the rest of us. Either that or he/she has got to be the most stupid and asinine individual God has created.

At any rate, perhaps if we ignore the fool, he/she will go away. Again Agena, I beg your forgiveness for using a forum that should be for the purpose of praise and constructive criticism to dealing with a useless buffoon. As my late father was fond of saying, the best part of Dwornock no doubt ran down the crack of his/her mama's ass.

Hey Agena..... forget the critics. This is another great story.

I'm not an attorney, but I do know that today most court systems use a number of factors to determine who should have full custody of the under-age children, but essentially they look at who is the primary care giver. However, it wasn't too long ago that a judge would unreservedly and automatically grant custody to a mother. Back then the only way a mother would be considered as unfit was to be proven a drug addict, physically abusive, or mentally/emotionally unstable (and even that was sometimes wasn't reason enough).

Since those times, fathers today have a much better chance of gaining full custody, especially when they are the primary care giver in the family. As the father in this story is. So no, it isn't a unreasonable outcome.

As a interesting point of fact, divorcing couples often privately negotiate custody agreements, and in many cases agree that the mother should have sole custody.

As far as the story goes, it was well written but as others have stated, a bit abrupt at the end.

Its hard to have cake and eat it just like sharing each piece with clients/guest/paramours. TK U MLJ LV NV

but screwing the slut bareback after finding out she is whoring around is a no-no; what kind of care provider will he be if he is dying of AIDS?

It's stated explicitly by the husband's lawyer that the husband is the primary care giver. It' also implied by the fact that he stayed home and worked on his computer while the wife left for work. He gets the kids off to school, fixes them breakfast, and even offers to do his wife's laundry. It's also stated that the wife travels a lot and the husband is home with the kids.

I know that adultery is not considered in custody battles, but extreme promiscuity might be. The wife says she is being treated for nymphomania and that would imply that she is unlikely to have a stable relationship with one man, which would not be a good environment for kids. There is just no way she would get custody if the courts follow their own rules. We all know some judges make up their own rules, but if ever there were a case where the man gets custody, this is surely it.

So why DWornock's comment that the woman would get custody? Why bother with a comment on someone's work if you can't understand what you've read?

There is no way she would not be given custody. When the woman is the primary care-giver the courts use that as an excuse for giving custody to the woman. However, when the man is the primary care-giver, the courts award custody to the woman. In a study of custody, covering an 18 month period in one county, unless the woman agreed to give the man custody, not one man was awarded custody.

Therefore, since could not be true the best I could give it is a 2.

The build up was great and detailed, but the end was abrupt.

You do a wonderful job of setting up the story but you rush to the ending. You need to spend the same time with the end as you do with the beginning of your stories

Wow, what a nightmare, this is like the wife from hell, I pray to god that this kind of shit will never happen to me...

Alittle more dialog would have been nice.

Any story needs editing and this one needed more. Plot and action was fine to follow, but emotions were way too black and white and simplified. Looked like justification for revenge story and I find these very offensive.

Now that shows love. Did he go after the man and all the men that she could/would name? Gladly, no ring through his nose with a leash to pull him.

I'm glad you started the new year by writing a story about a man who wouldn't put up with a cheating slut wife. I hate wimpy assed motherfuckers!

Blah blah blah... Like reading a newspaper account. Seriously no emotion, characters remain unknown and why mention kids.

Story could have read, wife had mysteries, husband got suspicious hired investigators, got report and divorce. And everyone lived happily ever after.

You wasted my time with pointless details!

it's pure made up, fucked up bullshit. I'm sorry this kind of crap is wanted by some of these idiots on here....they want the divorce or they want her to get pregnant or they want the husband to get revenge. Nobody just wants it to be fun anymore.

what a bunch of ka-ka.

no not even true. why do so many authors think cheating with no sex is erotic. no why does anybody think a story about a divorce with kids involved is erotic. just can't see the erotic point. with no explanation other than her being a sex adict placed in a single sentence for me this story is not really finished.

..had all the right elements except character development. Don't even feel for the kids.

Was an OK read

She's a nympho? That was the best you could come up with? ANd I hate to break the news to you, but excepting abusive situations, the woman is awarded the children and a divorce is never issued so quickly. the wheels of justice grind SLOWLY. And for the record, how the fuck are their incomes equal if lardass is home all day with the kids?

Still the story flowed really well. Sad story.

Difficult to swallow that.

I am curious as to how long this has been going on. Also her reasons why. Did she ever feel any guilt? Obviously she was enjoying her excursions as she told him she was not ready to take a job that did not allow her to screw other men - well, not those exact words but that was the gist of it.

No fault state makes things less complicated although I have to admit I kinda miss the wrangling. Also I wonder if DNA testing might not be in order.

Thanks for sharing

I m a fan but this was a cookie cutter tale with no drama nor originality. I await your next effort.

that life not the bullshit some writers go on with she didn't care about her family just herself.

The story was well-written and flowed very nicely. But the only "new" aspect of the story was the method of discovery of the adultery. Clare had obviously been doing her thing for a very long time based on the way she could conceal her guilt and carry on at home, acting as if nothing had happened. I'm surprised there were no other clues; pussy being loose (from some of the highly-endowed partners), lack of interest in sex with spouse, especially for the 24 hours after each trip, maybe some derision and lack of respect. After all, here is the "house-husband" while she is out confronting the world in her stressful job . . . Yet she was somehow able to avoid all of those sorts of mistakes. I did enjoy the story and would like to see more from this author.

I feel this is your best and most realistic work to date. I am always on edge with your stories, cause I never know if they're gonna be a male bashing, wimp, ("whorror") story, or a feel good (kick the bitch to the curb) story. Keep'em coming.

Nice clean consequences story which reminds me of thecelt's work. The interesting point is that there is no moment that you are in doubt about what is happening. The title gave it away and yet it kept my attention from start to finish! I agree with Harry's comment.

ZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZz Boringgggggggggg!!!

the wife's slow dawning realization that something is wrong was well done