All Comments on 'The Rings'

Love these Americans with their use of psychologists to medicalise their behaviours and decisions.

For a country that believes in freedom and freewill they sure don't act like it.

She did it because she could, she thought she'd get away with it and it would make no difference. Like all such behaviours she got off on it, it's human nature to enjoy thrills.

Stop using therapy and psychologists as a re-education tool like some backward commie state.

Very, very weak ending.

Amazing. She didn't even take a break after the Rings incident. She was mentally diseased. How did he get the kids? Guess I missed something.

sorry but he let her off to easy

As usual when a psychologist is involved there is always an excuse why the perpetrator of the dastardly deed is never to blame. I would guess they are taught in school that a patient cured is a customer lost. So it is never their patient's fault, the devil made them do it.

Male POV. Compartmentalized, organized, efficient and done. Whats love got to do with it?

1 of the story tags says "revenge". Ummmmm... where is it? All I read is he found out, got proof and ditched the bitch. 4 stars. DMW aka

He was far too kind toward the adulteres. BTB.

jopstorm1945

"I would allow visitations but my goal was to have full legal custody." - Visitation is usually court-ordered. He would likely get physical custody, shared legal custody.

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"The lawyer said I would be within my rights as custodian of the children to ask for that." - But he's not the custodian until the case is adjudicated.

"we were divorced became final in six months"? Huh?

Lack of emotion --- results from endless repetition.

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"Like she did a thousand times before" Love Her Madly -- The Doors

So glad he kicked her to the Kerk I hate cheaters (jaybee186)

Here is what I think of all stories on this site:

EVISCERATE ALL CHEATING BITCHES. PISS ON THEIR ASHES!

Lead a good life; it goes on.

A little too dry and surgical. I like the plot line though.

Basically a copy of many other WL stories; except It was dry and routine.

Like they say; to sell something in Johnson County KS it has to be spit and polished presentation.

Well that said; I gave you a rating of 3. Please keep improving your writing.

The story reads like a shopping list.? Absolutely no depth of emotion.

An incredibly stupid story, finds out she's cheating, asks himself "Is she going bareback or using protection" Who gives a fuck? Then you have the standard, wimpy make love to her after you know she's betraying you. This guy was begging to get cheating on.

Not much depth of emotion. It read more like a business report than a story.

A couple of good ideas, but to me there's no depth to the story, it's like reading a report of events; it's a good outline of what could be a great story but it needs extra " meat on the bone "

Not bad story 3⭐

As for the commenter iameasel, don't get your woke panties in a bunch. You obviously are a typical selfish Republican hating Democrap feminist that obviously speaks without doing any detective work.

Hey miss high and mighty, what are you doing on a site like this anyway?😂

Meh. No emotion. Reads like a police report.

3 stars

I did enjoy it for what it was. The ring thing was great though.

As for the drivel spouting idiots below, no women still have not caught up to men cheating...currently and for the last few years thats a rightwing wet diapered pile of outrage, mostly because they've always looked down on women and dont like them getting all uppity these days thinking that they're people.

Factually speaking women still lag behind men when it comes to cheating and no women still arent causing domestic violence more than men. Their numbers have increased on both of those but they still come in second. Check you misogynistic idiocy as the door kids.

Four stars, for the cute business with the rings. But again, no history, none of the Q&A which seems obvious. Why? How long? No guilt at all? Needed development IMHO.

Typical wife cheating story, but a good read I enjoyed it.

Re: comments. "Nymphomania" is a myth. Yes, today women initiate domestic violence a majority of the time and are more adulterous than men. No, women do not have more "sexual capacity" than men. They have less libido and are less orgasmic during sex, on average. They only have more capacity if you fill them up with lube and get them to lay there and take it. That, of course, has nothing to do with sexual desire.

His getting custody IS believable since he's the primary care-giver and she travels a lot, but her having to vacate the house before the divorce is adjudicated is not. Since a cheated on husband who loses the house is expected to continue paying the mortgage, why doesn't she have to at least pay part of the mortgage?

I agree with other commenters. Stories are all very formulaic, with next to no emotion in them. But then again, pretty much every story i've read on literotica gives the characters the emotional breadth of a tea spoon. Seriously, it's like they all copy each other and don't read any other books to learn from.

On a different note, why does the husband in stories like this always let further adultery take place after he already knows it happened? its just too stupid to be believed.

Calm down people! This is Literotica after all. It’s open to stories and it takes a lot of work to write. That said- Enjoyed the story and appreciate the effort. Have been trying to put some stories together without success. Those anonymous comments filled with vitriol make me wonder why do they read and viciously dump on the efforts of other people?

Good story, as they say what goes around comes around. You can always trust but you always a need to verify and if there is any doubt take the necessary steps and that he did and kicked her ass to the as he should have.

As for professor x comment below, studies and statistics now show that in the last 20-25 years , female infidelity has incr see three fold while male has remained static. The same with female domestic violence. We have achieved parity, however the laws and public opinion still,favor females, and judges still routinely rule for the wife,regardless who is the offender. Modern women are developing the attitude they are entitled to extra on the side since female sex capacity is so much higher and no man can keep up. Pay attention as society is going down the shithole and the subjugation of men has begun

Hubby had enough info.! He should have nipped it in the bud earlier! I enjoyed the pay backs!!

Good story but way to short on detail. The author writes a lot of these type of LW stories where adultery s discovered and hen divorce. There's no real explanation of why wife cheats , no family involvement etc. like you get in other stories. Very much straight to the point stories. The author hasn't published anything of a number of years which is a shame as they are a good writer. I do prefer the authors stories where the husband and wife get past the cheating and reconcile.

The plot is pretty realistic I thought, though I suspect in real life the parts are reversed.

Nymphomania is often mentioned but I have yet to see one in real life.

Telling her new boyfriend about her past behavior is the act of a fucking asshole.

A normal man, upon finding his wife had lost her rings while she was dancing, would flip shit and bring about a confrontation.

if I commented on this before. I remember reading this before halfway through. My current thought is since it's a no fault state in this story; I wouldn't have let it go as far or used a P.I. (Why waste the money?) I would have just taken the briefcase to the kitchen table, called her to come to there, open the briefcase, pulled out the condoms, and then simply state that I would get a divorce lawyer in the morning. There no way I would have had sex with her ever again if I were in that situation.

A good story.

The only thing negative about this story

is that it's short.

The plot is tight and good,

with no important questions unanswered.

Some more recent writers would do well

in reading stories like this one.

It never hurts

to experience quality writing.

Top ratings from me.

2 from me - repetition.....repetition......repetition etc........

on the nymphomania. Just another corruptable female shrink trying to excuse the wifes cheating. If she had the urges, she could have enlisted husbands help or seen a doctor on her own. Only after being caught does she look for help. fuck her. need to drop a dime on the men he knew the names of to their wives, misery loves company.

Why do most guys make sure the wife is fired .. That just means She gets more in Alimony . Make her work for a living .. But what really hurt this Story was No Punishment to the Husband .. Let The Cheating Husband get raked over the coals .

When first we practice to be a slut

Well, a story that didn't have the poor cuckold eating out her cheating cunt.. I would never even think about doing that when knowing she had been riding some assholes cock.. Why do so many of these authors write that shit in these stories is beyond me!!!

Wife cheats. Hubby finds out. Divorce occurs. See that didn't take many words.

Other wise okay, but I don't think he could get custody of both kids so easily! All laws and judges are sympathetic to the woman whether adultery is established or not

Thank you for finally letting the husband have some BALLLS!!! BTB!!!

You are finally writing a story about the real behavior of a cuckolded man. No messing around -- kicked to the curb. As it should be.

This story probably more closely indicates what would happen in a bad marriage. Just can't believe he wouldn't have noticed some odd characteristics earlier. No, she is not a whore. Whores are working girls, leave them alone. This woman is a cheating slut.

Another typical Agena story. Pretty vanilla with an anticlimactic ending.

Agena has some interesting LW storylines but the endings just seem to be a non-event.

She gets caught, is served and they divorce. End of story.

I agree with previous anon. Her problem was nothing but being a whore. Awfully gentle burn.

A whore? 😄

a proof reader. Lots of mistakes that should have been caught before publishing.

DNA test are in order

I'm sorry but if it were me. The first thing I would have done would be to check the DNA of the children. Just for peace of mind.

Why not came up in past seek treatment then

Why only when traveling

Not enough punishment

It seems to me like an alcoholic. They're sober at home, only go on benders when they're away from home? Doesn't seem likely to me. If anything, with more time at home than on the road, she would have a harder time controlling it at hime than on the road! She travels once a month for two or three nights, so she can control her nymphomania for over three weeks at a time, but can't for two or three nights?

and what is a 'marrying man'?

some sad lil' manlett that has a 'long talk' about the reasons she cheats on him?

what in the fuck would her excuses do to ease his pain?

he found out his wife was a liar, disrespectful, and he even gave her one last chance to stop and confess. He's already a bitch for extending that olive branch. And you're a cuckold for thinking marriage involves a man bending over backwards for a woman that wont put in the bare minimum of effort.

of course she wants to fight for him, now that she loses him! now that her lies were exposed! i DATED a nymphomaniac once. she was young and ALREADY seeing a psychologist. She wasn't just randomly fucking dudes. She was 21 and more of an adult than this cheating slut that gets knocked up with other men while having kids, a career, a loving husband, and a mortgage! She WANED to cheat. She WANTED to betray her husband and family! And now her family no longer wants her!

face it cuck, the only reason you're so hard on the husband is because you are DESPERATE to love even one woman. You'll treat her like a literal god. Because, let's face it, you don't sound like a lady killer. You also don't understand love. Love isn't eternal, it's a chemical reaction brought about by HARD WORK. Husband put in work, wife didn't. She god fired from her JOB. Men and women get married and DO WORK to keep that love cocktail of hormones and endorphins going strong.

But way too easy on the cheating bitch.

I doubt he ever lov d her anyway. To just give it up without finding out why is total bullshit. He is not a marring kind of man

About the nymphomania. She never produced proof of that diagnosis so we can't blame the author for using that as an excuse. His character used it as an excuse. Not a nympho, just a slut. Quite a bit of difference.

Agena likes to use psychiatrist terms. This is not nymphomania as it was obviously limited to character's trips. It seems just a regular case of promiscuity. Strange it was not noticed before the "rings episode" because a woman that would be picking up random men for sex on her trips does not appear to be very cautious. For one thing this activity could have ended up real bad for her, not just by somebody stealing her purse but also by running into a violent predator. Good story though. I like Agena's stories, too bad he is gone.

The husband was in fact reactionary to the wife rather than being more proactive. Like presenting a hardcore ultimatum or warning with Express counseling. The wife seemed only concerned with being caught not the betraying act in of itself. I didn't like the story.

Out of every 10. This was not one of them.

I liked it, but the two paramours he had the goods on - he should have sent the CD/Pic's to their wives. Obvious they were just as bad CHEATing too.

Other than that, the story is some well-travelled ground.

But there seems to be something missing. Her reason for cheating on her husband, how she came to be a nymphomaniac. How can a wife profess to love her husband and children and yet live the life of a prostitute away from them.

Humiliating the husband seems to be the focus of many of your stories. One wife got off of deliberately getting pregnant by her lover and having her husband raise the child. Then she got off on making her husband clean her up after having sex with other men. Now a wife leads the life of a prostitute every time she left home.

Some women get off on having sex with as many men as possible. Some are spurred by having sex with husband's friends, coworkers, competitors or even brothers. Some get off on having the kind of sex she denies her husband. Some enjoy denying her husband sex while she is enjoying it daily with others. And some women like to blatantly cuckold their husband before people who know him.

The slut didn't get burned enough. She had the good job, she should have paid him alimony since he was the primary caregiver for the children,

I've read too many stories that brings bipolarity, depression or, in this case, nympho as a reason to cheat. Sad they don't bother to research a littlebit about what they're writing about. A good story (not great, not bad) following the basic pattern of cheating wives subject

I agree, if she was so nympho, how can she control it when she's home?

Plus, she plans it, packing the sexy dress and undies, goes to the lounge without her rings. And wearing the anniversary necklace!

Identifying one lover when nothing was done to him

Nymphomania is a mental disorder marked by compulsive sexual behavior. Compulsions are unwanted actions, or rituals, that a person engages in repeatedly without getting pleasure from them or being able to control them. In the case of nymphomania, people act out their compulsions by engaging in risky behaviors such as promiscuity.

Looked up what nymphomania is. She could not have controlled the compulsion enough to only be whe she travelled.

This is a good story and you're a very good writer. The story was simple, clean, flowed well, characters fairly well fleshed out. I've never been divorced, but I figure they go mostly like this story. The husband or wife discovers the cheating and then decides on whether to reconcile or divorce. No ordering of miniature cameras and phone taps, scheduling a humiliating reveal at company party or family reunion and the cheated spouse didn't win the lottery a few days after the divorce was finalized. The other stories might be fun, but this one has it's place too. Thanks! 4 stars.

her excuse for cheating is nymphomania, why not try to fuck husband to death before cheating?

wouldn,t nymphomania be apparent before the marriage? a husband would notice if his mrs was permanently horny! wouldn't he?

its not nymphomania! its cheating skank syndrome, a very different affliction.

Looks like you banged this one out in an hour or so.

The method of uncovering the deception was unique and kind of wasted on such a short story.

Sad tale that was well written.

Doesn't waste time getting rid of the cheating cunt. And doesn't hinder her visitation with the kids.

I couldn't remember it, so I re-read it. I think that the story is too pat. Everything fell into place. The fact that she may have shed a tear on the way out, is understandable if what she has said is true. Why would it have been so hard to tell her husband of so many years that she has a case of Fuck a lot. Why didn't he figure out that his wife loved to fuck, wouldn't it have been evident when she was home, or when they went out? It just seems to pat of an ending. Then there is a question as to why didn't she try to talk to him the whole time waiting for the divorce, if she loved him, which I don't recall her saying.

Her account had increased. If the increase was due to additional deposits beyond the inheritance, I would have gone after my 50%. Any and all information I received from the PI would become common knowledge to all friends and relatives. As a writer, maybe when the rubber broke and she was impregnated ,she also came down with herpes. Any and all wives of her fuck buddies would all be notified. The whore deserved it.

Where the hell is the revenge in this story HUH ?

to offset the asshole of LIT who reads everyone of these and then votes 1

Getting a report from an operative. Just had next to no feeling or emotion.

The story feels very perfunctory, it could stand being fleshed out especially the last part suffers from the classical 'telling rather than showing'.

They always cry when they are caught!

If it bothered them that much they wouldn't do it in the first place!

A nothing story

Also a serial cheater. If she claimed she was a nymph their whole marriage was now in question. Are the kids really his? Has he been raising other men's children? Worse type of cheating cunt. She wasn't sorry for the betrayal. She was sorry she was caught! Hopefully she catches a horrible std.

Damn

What's the difference. The only unbelievable part of this story is the she was a "good mother". Not likely: she was never home, she cheated on her FAMILY, she caused a divorce that would definitely hurt the kids, and of course she hurt the kids father. That by definition is a lousy mother! This is a common problem in these stories. Ever met a real cheater? Male or female: They are selfish fucks! They do not even care about staying with their kids or how their kids will fare in a divorce. Pure Shit.

The reason - might be as simple as "I saw them and they were so hot and I wondered what it would be like to have sex with them. "

But the REASON doesn't make the sex happen... that still requires the excuse...

And here's an excuse - "I couldn't help myself."

Reasons are true... excuses are just so much fluff...

She might have had a version of nymphomania... maybe... but it still required an excuse - and I didn't hear that...

and it may even be true. I think he at least owed her a sit down talk. anyone would that much for a drug addict family member. the divorce was necessary, as she already knew.

or a police report.

mechanical?

or, a variation on a theme.

it was all there, young couple, 2 children, 1 parent has to travel for business. equal incomes. the non-travelling parent finds something just a bit off. which leads to P.I. which leads to divorce. the end

Because he was married and had two small children.

It seems it is well known within the relevant professional communities that wives cheat. And cheat a lot. And for no particular reason, by their own admission. They don't have to have a reason or an excuse. And they can cheat without loosing any love or respect for their husbands. They really can be Loving Wives. They really do think they can have their cake and eat it, too. As a husband with a cheating wife, I do not understand it. As a scientist, I accept the objective observations.

The wife's explanation of being a nymphomaniac is just an excuse she is giving to the husband. She probably is not seeing a therapist, too.

Most states make Best Interests of the Child the official rule for awarding custody of children. Judges don't often follow it, though, awarding custody to the wife in the vast majority of cases, despite the facts of the case demanding a different award.

The husband is lucky to even get reasonable visitation times, let alone physical custody of the children.

With respect to the cheating wife, the story is realistic enough to be believable. Not so concerning custody of the children.

The guy picking her up and fucking her get beaten up? She is in a bar not wearing a ring and wanting to get picked up. What has the guy done that warrants a beating?

Why are you criticizing this story because you don't believe it can be true?

Besides the fact that, as others have stated, that fathers who are primary care givers DO often get custody, there is the fact that this is LW, where ex-Navy SEAL, computer and surveillance expert husbands are a dime a dozen! And you judge a story by how TRUE it is?

ROFLMFAO!

I would think her employer wouldn't take too kindly to her using company paid business trips as cover for her slutting around!

were is the revenge it this story, who gives a fuck if she's fucking around I want to see the revenge like beating the guy she is fucking and then getting the guys wife and fucking her and the sending a video to him. that's the stuff I like. sorry bud no stars for you

Although well written, I couldn't feel anything but anxious about the poor husband. The wife was given opportunities to evaluate her behavior by circumstances and subtle hints by her beleaguered husband. When children are involved, a marriage has much more involved in the depth and scope of responsibilities. I feel the author left a slight crack of hope in the story til the last trip dealt the fatal blow to a tenuous situation to the married couple. After the engagement of a PI and her leaving the house for the last trip, the author cemented the fate of the marriage. In spite of it so well done, I didn't like this story for numerous reasons. First of all, there was no revenge. Secondly, the wife was mentally ill.

case closed, TK U MLJ LV NV

for about a minute and a half, but soon rolled over quickly enough. Perhaps the pregnancy was a wake up call to the fact that the marriage could never be repaired. So, yes the marriage, and the story ends swiftly. I agree, that a little more emotional confrontation could have really helped this story to stand out, and that lacking it, the story is just another cheating wife vignette. My biggest problem however, is the supposed excuse of nymphomania. While this story seemed intentionally sparse on details, it never seemed that her married sex life contained any of the hints that a woman truly suffering with that would exhibit. So, bullshit! Perhaps it was even the author's intention to have the reader recognize her excuse as such a load of crap, but this really was just another slutty tramp, trying to get her jollies off, thinking that her husband's support would remain unending. I wish we had more descriptions of her, her past, her mindset, and such. Was she just a "cake and eat it too" sort of slut, or was the thrill of having a secret life reliving her single days enough to sustain her cheating ways? We will never know, because this author deprived us of adequate character development. Both of her, as to the why; and of him, as to the need to ask. Those were the main things missing that would have made this story better.

Good story a little pat but reasonably done.

Seemed maybe a little cut and dry and some things could have used some more explanation, but overall, not too bad.

Very good buildup. Well written. I would have savored it a bit more if this had included some post discovery dialogue between husband and wife. I love that kind of emotional exploration. The story ended as abruptly as the marriage.

That is my only negative comment on the story -

The other issue I have questions about is the woman herself - a more drawn out ending might have answered those - the nympho line does not not cover it.

The realities of custody etc were just fine - BUT readers ought to remember - there is no reason to ASSume all stories are supposed to be completely true or believable by all of us - they are stories after all - entertainment!