All Comments on 'The Rising Sun & The Morning Calm Ch. 03'
by vinkb
- 14 Comments
Anonymousalmost 15 years agoThis was great !!! Your intelligence shows as does the beauty of your writing style. You weren't so caught up in the sexuality that you forgot the beauty of the eroticism in a first meeting. LOVE IT ! You've gotta write more!
Anonymousalmost 15 years agoLooking forward to seeing how this takes off....thank you.
Paniolo Boyalmost 15 years agoIt's interesting to see how we try to assimilate language from one to another. Growing up in a Japanese family setting, we would sometimes hear the word "Baka" used to refer to someone as a 'fool.' Baka being the shortened version of 'bakatare'. In your story, it is written as "Baga" which closely approximates it's pronounciation in rough or slang Japanese.
The story line is quite interesting and indicates your immersion in Japanese history and culture. Like your story of the ball player and his two Japanese wives, the nuances that you write about are evidence of your intimate familiarity.
Jozu-nei! Good job. Look forward to reading more of your works.
VictorDoUrdenalmost 14 years agoIt's quite good how you focus more on the story then the sex... actually making this worthwhile reading and throughly interesting.
The cultural nuances only deepen the story in depth, nice job.
whenwilliover 13 years agoReading more!!
Anonymousabout 13 years agoI'm absolutely loving this! Thanks for putting it out for free!!!
Anonymousabout 12 years agoso i'm waiting 4 the next read...tempting me 2 go check out yr page. nice..i like it.
Gerrivalmost 12 years agoI like this story it's so captivating. I smiled like a giddy teenager all the way through!
magikman233over 10 years agoyou used the wrong spelling for idiot in japanese,its spelled baka,i even double checked it with my japanese professor who herself is japanese to make certain i was correct,other than that,keep up the good work sir,i like the story so far
