by vinkb
I hope you continue this as it's really good. I have found your work extremely enjoyable to read.
The title says it all. Your writing style and imagination are superb but I feel like I was left hanging a bit. Please write more of this story and write more in general, because you're good.
The brief language lessons and bits of historical background are great, and the story itself has yet to disappoint me. I like the characters, and I've enjoyed reading very much; needless to say, I await the next chapter with excitement. :D
This chapter was short and sweet. I am so glad to see Saburo meet a suitable end. Please write more soon! This has been a fabulous story!
I was wondering how the dart situation was going to resolve itself. Very much looking forward to the next chapter.